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in the top of of the mountain 
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Once i had a vision and from it i wrote this:

Many lands i can see
and the wind in my face
alone i might look
but alone i not am

a mighty thunder in the sky
brings a smile to my face
behind me there is a tree
with a watcher also too

a raven was there and
a wolf too
i felt enthusiastiac
my feets to the ground
made me feel midgard

For some seconds we were all one
Aesir & Vanir took my body
and that bring a smile to my face
when i was in the top of a mountain




note: I am portuguese native speaker if the english is not very lyric perhaps is because my translation sucks :D


Tue Jun 16, 2015 8:36 pm
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I think you did very well Flavio and I liked your poem. I found it to be quite powerful and invokes some wonderful images. Thank you for sharing. Storm


Tue Jun 16, 2015 11:28 pm
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Do not worry about your English, as Storm said your words carry powerful imagery. I happen to enjoy the way they flow. Thank you for sharing this.


Wed Jun 17, 2015 7:10 am
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thanks for the nice feedback guys sometimes Bragi inspires me when i am awake in long nights and i write things like these :)


Wed Jun 17, 2015 1:02 pm
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