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To the son of Odin 
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Odin son, today I greet you
The Lord of thunder
God of the heavens
Thor!

I thank you for all the past
and the future
of our friendship
which now I honor

I renew with you
my way to north
you called me back

Lord of the sky
Son of Odin
Lord of the thunder
Patron of the humanity

I come to you in this day
your day
Hail you Thor!


this one was originally wrriten by me in swedish so translation also might make it not as lyric as it should be, hope you guys like it and i wrote this a long time a go in Thursday the day of Thor, it reminds me of my path with him since the beggning.


Fri Jul 03, 2015 5:04 pm
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This is very good. If you would like to post it in svenska I would be very interested to read it. Storm.


Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:33 am
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Norse Storm Dragon wrote:
This is very good. If you would like to post it in svenska I would be very interested to read it. Storm.


are you swedish?

here is the original version:

Till Odin sonen idag har jag hälsar dig
Till Herren för åska
Gud i himlen
Thor!

Jag tackar dig för allt det förflutna
och framtiden
av vår vänskap
att jag nu hedrar

Jag förnyar med dig
min väg med norr
att du ringde mig tillbaka

Härren av himlen
Sonen av Odin
Härren av åskan
Beskyddare av mänskligheten

Jag kommer till dig i denna dag
din dag
Hälsa dig Thor!


my swedish is not the best also so feel free to correct any mistakes!


Sun Jul 05, 2015 2:21 pm
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Flavio, I am not a native speaker but study the language so I cannot purport to be a master at it. However, I do enjoy reading and checking as this is part of my learning process. I have had a look - you have done a very good job - I think that the only change I would make would be

Quote:
att jag nu hedrar
which roughly translates to "Now that I am no credit" should be
Quote:
Som jag nu äran
.

I hope that this has helped - I know that I have found it to be beneficial - Storm


Sun Jul 05, 2015 11:39 pm
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Norse Storm Dragon wrote:
Flavio, I am not a native speaker but study the language so I cannot purport to be a master at it. However, I do enjoy reading and checking as this is part of my learning process. I have had a look - you have done a very good job - I think that the only change I would make would be

Quote:
att jag nu hedrar
which roughly translates to "Now that I am no credit" should be
Quote:
Som jag nu äran
.

I hope that this has helped - I know that I have found it to be beneficial - Storm



thanks i will post here soon another poem i wrote for Thor that i use in my blots also prevoisly in swedish


Mon Jul 06, 2015 5:33 pm
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