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For the Allfather

Father of all
high one
I come to you this day
to honor and thank

in your example
I understand life
I understand the work and the sacrifice
the importance of wisdom
without pride

every day a mystery is revealed to me
in you infinite vision
I know you are with me
and encourages my growth

to succeed you told me
work, learn and strive
there is no magic without wisdom
no power without perseverance

O noblest of the gods
Father of all
I come to honor you in this day
and together we will celebrate
our everlasting covenant
I'll be by your side until the Ragnarok

The way of the runes
the way of life
and the path of war are you
and I renew my covenant
that make me grow

Hail To Odin!
The father of all!


Tue Jul 21, 2015 11:07 pm
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Flavio, this is very good and resounds with me. Personally I would not use the word covenant - this is a very strong christian word to me. I would use bond, agreement, pact or promise. Just my thoughts. Thank you for sharing ... Storm


Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:58 am
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Norse Storm Dragon wrote:
Flavio, this is very good and resounds with me. Personally I would not use the word covenant - this is a very strong christian word to me. I would use bond, agreement, pact or promise. Just my thoughts. Thank you for sharing ... Storm


i apreciate your feedback, i havent thought of that in fact because i didnt knew it in fact..i wrote in portuguese my native language and translated to be posted here.

but i also apreciate that you like it. From the texts i wrote i think this was the most complex one because my relationship with our Allfather is really new and there is much more to come and i have much more to learn with him

F.S.


Wed Jul 22, 2015 10:17 am
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